Jaguar

I chose this piece of writing because I really like jaguars they are one of my favorite animals another reason why I chose this piece is because I learnt that jaguars have the most powerful bite force out all big cats. This piece of writing was pretty easy because it is easy to explain my writing. The hard thing was to make my paragraph correct because I had not organised my paragraphs. My next step is to use more punctuation and my other thing I am going to work on is to use better vocabulary and to organize my paragraphs before I start writing.