Monday, July 2, 2018

Creepy forest

The name creepy forest got its name from all of the darkness and the mysterious noises that was happening around the dad,Cruise. Son, Liam. mum,gabrielle, daughter, Paris and the dog that was a husky. As they all looked in the distance they all seen a bunch of gloomy yellow eyes. As the sun was just coming up for the morning.

The family started to get worried and they started to hear ghostly noises the trees were blocking the sun light and it was very dark and creepy the only sunlight they could see was at the end of the creepy forest. Even a shimmer of light was struggling to shine through the trees.

As the wind closed the trees up so there was no sunlight not even a shimmer of light was shining through the trees and a blink of an eye liam somehow he vanished the family got worried they started to keep walking and another blink of an eye paris vanished. It’s just gabrielle,cruise and the husky.


As the husky sniffed down the creepy forest they found a house and they heard
Liam and Paris scream and  Gabrielle and Cruise said “just wait there”
and then cruise busted down the door and the dog started barking at the kidnapper

And then gabrielle and cruise grabbed paris and liam.

The dog started sniffing again the family was following the dog after two miles of walking and starvation and dehydration they finally came to gas station they all had twenty dollars they all bought themselves some food and some drinks cruise bought the dog some dog food then they found a gps and they found themselves home.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Dayton it's Ella F from St Patricks school, I really your story but at some point it didn't make sence, but other then that it's good.

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