Hi Dayton I am Kingi and I go to Paihia School I am Yr 7 I like your metaphor poem it has a lot of description about yourself. Maybe next time add a bit more detail to what you are describing. But other then that yours is very good keep up the good work.
Hello, Dayton, I'm Ciaran from St Patrick's, I like your metaphor poem because descrition about yourself is great. Thanks, have a great day!
Kia ora Dayton , I am Isaiah from Paihia School. I really liked your metaphor poem. The one I liked the most was Dayton is a Ford Mustang zooming across the field. The one I didn't get was Dayton is a glued sandwich because he can’t catch a ball. We did something exactly like this. Any ways keep up the great work.
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